Alright, edit that in, and I think that's all. Approved. Are E-ranks free? If not 200 Ryo.

Edits made

And I think I need to pay for it so I'll take the price of 200, buying it now

Name: Kinzoku no kage shōseki (金属の影証跡 - Metal Shadow Trail)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: Metal
Type: Clan Ninjutsu
Range: Various, Refer to description
Description: Passive; The Kinzoku no kage shōseki is a hidden art held only by those who are high ranking in the metal crafting clan and is such a close guarded secret that not even many clansmen that don't partake of it's practice know of it through anything but myth. The Kinzoku no kage shōseki is one of the true final levels of a metal crafter's ability, that being the ability to merge themselves into large sheets of metal and move around inside it. This is a highly stressful thing to do and can only be performed in intervals of three rounds at a time, after they have made their exit they will have to rest their bodies for four rounds outside in the physical realm. When a Kinzoku master enters sheet metal they seem to shrink down to a microscopic level to others and remain unseen while from their point of view they are in an alternate dimension where they are free to walk around and move in a black and white world (known as the steel world) that is separated from the real world by a thin hazy barrier of dark gray that shows the other side to them. While able to reach out with their arms and things of that nature they cannot release any non metal technique from the inside nor can they completely exit the steel world or else the technique is ended early. The user is able to take anything they desire into the steel world but if the technique ends and it was left behind it can never be recovered. This technique is only usable three times in a topic and if attempted more than that the user will be trapped in the stel world eternally without hope of escape. When someone is trapped in the steel world they are shown in on the surface of the metal and allowed to see into the real world like normal, however no matter how hard they slam against the barrier or scream they cannot make a noise of affect the metal, in addition you never age or die in the steel world but you do suffer from the normal aliments like hunger and thirst, the only way to end your life is if someone destroys the piece completely. While in the steel world the user can travel anywhere in the sheet of metal they are in as well as any sheet that is in direct contact with that sheet, they can not however use their clan abilities to connect pieces after entering nor can they partially exit and connect pieces without ending the technique early and losing whatever pieces of their body is still on the other side to the steel world forever.

While I BUMP the jutsu above this post I have a simple E rank to post as well


Name: The Mark of Insanity
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Element: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Various
Description: The use of this jutsu is something blessed upon Takeshi from the heavens above as atonement for his ever worsening mental state, it allows him to leave his own personal mark wherever he wishes so that it will never fade or wash away. This mark is completely non-harmful and requires that he touch the area he wishes in order to leave his marker behind, unless he utilizes both his wind and water chakra natures and leaves the mark as a cloud of mist that rises up into the air. No hand seals required unless he wishes to do the variation with elemental enhancement.

The Mark:

Kinzoku no kage shōseki: So the user of this technique is still able to fight from within the steel world? If when a limb is stuck out from the steel world and cut off, would this cause the user to be trapped within the steel world? Can another person be brought in with the user, or does this only allow for other items to be brought in? Can the clan techniques be used on the metal that the user is in to fight, or only on metal not connected?

Mark of insanity: What exactly does this mark do?

Shadow Path:

• Indeed they can fight from within
  
• If the limb is cut off by another person no they would no be trapped but if the effects of the technique cut something off then trapping of at least part of them would occur yes
  
• As it says, anything the user desires can be brought in
  
• Clan techs can ONLY be used on the piece they are inside

Mark:

• The mark does nothing, simply a tattoo with no effects

Shadow Path: So the user could effectively bring in an opponent, and then just leave them there?

Mark of insanity: I see no issue with this than. Approved 100 Ryo.

It is possible but since the user can not leave the steel world completely it is rather simple to dodge being grabbed and then drug down into it.

And alright then, Ill need someone to deduct 100 since Ill take it now.

Alright, I don't see much issue with it... So I will approve it, though it is possible another may change it. 25000 Ryo.

Buying Shadow Trail now for 25k

Ryo Deducted

Name: Shinobi Skill: Masking the Senses
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Element: n/a
Type: Genjutsu
Range: hearing and smell range of the people around
Description: Passive; at will the user is able to mask their presence in several ways. These include sounds and smell, meaning that while they make absolutely no sound or smell at all they also are clearly visible to their opponents and allies. Three round max duration, four round cool down.

How long can you remain unheard and unsmelled per use?

3 posts sound good?

Ya, edit that in.

Done

Takeshi wrote:

Passive; at will the user is able to mask their presence in several ways. These include sounds and smell

Does this mean there are more ways? If so, list them.

nope those are the only ways

When you say clearly visible, does that mean your easier to see? If so, how much easier.

No it just means that I in no way make it harder for people to see me, if they can see me before I use it then its just as easy to see me after its active.

Oh alright. Well I see no other problems, approved 1k

Name: Spirit Gun
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 50 Feet out and 15 feet across
Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra into their index finger the same amount of time it takes them for seals of an A rank jutsu. After chakra has been charged the user makes their hand fold into a gun shape with the thumb up, the index pointing out and the rest curled toward the palm. Then they fire out a blast of pure energy that is able to melt steel at close range (within five feet). This "hot spot" is covered instantly after release but there is a delay in covering the rest that lasts two seconds. After the initial "hot spot" the blast just causes second degree burns. This technique can bounce off mirrors (actual mirrors, not just shiny materials) but the mirror is shattered afterwards. Six round cool down. Twice Per Topic.

How far can this blast travel, and does rebounding off of mirrors reduce it's speed or power? What is it's speed, and force behind it?

most of that is in there, the distance, speed and what happens when it hits something is already included so now for that last question. No mirrors do not slow down or affect the beam at all other than rebounding it, thats why the mirror shatters when used that way.

If this hot spot melts steel, what does it do to the human body?