Name: Spirit Ball Attack
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: Raiton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 100 feet
Description: No seals; rather than seals the user builds up chakra in their palm for the same time they would normally be doing hand seals for an A rank jutsu. The user takes all the chakra they built up and form it into a sphere of energy two feet in diameter, they then release the sphere to fly around them to be controlled in mid-flight. The sphere can move around within 100 feet of the user at a speed of 40 mph, when it hits something it is like being hit by a small car going the same speed. When the user wishes the orb will explode into a blast of energy that will cause severe third degree electrical burns to everything caught inside it's blast range. This blast range is a five foot radius. The orb is able to be moved around for up to three rounds before it explodes automatically. Once per topic.

Seems legit nothing to extreme about it and everything seems legit.

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Approved price~ 10k/10,000 ryo (Approving under the circumstances that I am tired XD)

Alright then, Ill go ahead and purchase this but give me another stamp of approval when you arent tired lol

If it needs edits or whatever thats cool, or if the price goes up Ill pay the difference.

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Official approval The price still stands.

Name: Destructo Disc
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 100 feet
Description: No seals; rather than seals the user builds up chakra in their palm for the same time they would normally be doing hand seals for a B rank jutsu. During this charge up time the user is required to take a wide stance and can not move. The user takes all the chakra they built up and form it into a disc of energy three feet across, they then release the disc to fly straight forward in a fast paced bee line. The disc moves at a speed of 50 mph, when it hits something it is like being hit by a small car going the same speed. The disc has the power to slice through iron and lower grade materials while being able to dent steel on impact, this means it can slice through a human body like butter. This technique has a cool down of seven posts.

The Wide Stance:

Can it turn back like a boomerang?

nope

Spirit Ball needs to be changed to once a topic, price to remain the same. Edit that even though its bought. All A rank jutsu are either simply two times per topic use or once per topic use. The price of this should have been around 20,000. We are talking th force of a car, can blow up at will, and the incredible ability to burn through steel. Normal chakra based attacks do not burn without the assistance of an element. It will need to be lightning based for explosions and fire based for such a high melting point..

Destructo Disc - That's B rank power. Cooldown of 7. Make those edits. When you claim it cuts through metal, your basically stating it can rip the human body to shreds. Therefore it is a one hit kill. It will be an incredibly expensive B rank at that as well.

Spirit ball, Ill do those edits now then and I have no problem adding in Raiton for the explosive properties. However I only did the melting thing due to the properties of my spirit gun. If need be Ill change it to 3rd degree electrical burns. Side note, if you wish to make this 20k just deduct the other 10k from Tappaja since its there

Destructo Disc - B rank is fine, Ill make all the edits and I have no problem saving up for an expensive jutsu

Ok, make the edits to third degree electrical 'burns' and once all other additions are made, bump here and confirm it.

Destructo Disc - just like in the anime, you must carry the wide stance and you cannot move while you charge it. That will be the drawback of the jutsu and will help with the price. Krillin early on had to charge it this way (Until his character became less important and they let him run with it bc they felt sorry for him being a weak ass bitch made) and had to use the wide stance to throw it with enough velocity to make it super effective.

Done and Done

bump?

Spirit Ball - Much better now. Its good to go.

Destructo Disc - I'd still like to go into human damage factor, force technical purposes. Will it go all the way through the torso? Etc.

A clean slice straight through, that's why we added that I have to stand still to charge it

I know what we discussed, it was just getting you to add it in lol. I'm just remaining professional here. Add it in, just for the TP.

Merry fuckin Christmas by the way foo

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Destructo Disc - 9,000 Ryo

Name: Nan no Kaizō (Soft Physique Modification)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a C rank jutsu. The user dislocates their joints then controls their softened body with chakra, allowing them to stretch and twist any part of their body at any angle, elongating and even coiling around their opponent. This can also be used to make the user's body more malleable and serpent-like. The maximum extension a part of the body can receive is three times its normal length except for the neck which can be made to be a maximum of ten feet long. Assuming you have the strength to do so naturally you can snap bones that you constrict for a full round. Lasts three rounds with a five round cool down.

Name: Hebi no kuchi (serpent's mouth)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Description: The user charges chakra into their jaw for the same amount of time they would normally perform seals for a D rank jutsu. After the charging is complete the chakra morphs the mouth in shape, enlarging the teeth to twice their normal size as well as sharpening them into razor like blades that can shred flesh and crack bone. In addition the chakra affects the jaw by allowing the user to detach the jaw (expands a maximum of 12 inches) at will as well as the ability to lock it into place. This lock jaw effect can be broken away from by a person bitten if that person uses up 10 chakra to charge it into the wound which forces the user to let go. This lasts for five rounds with a six round cool down.

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Soft Physique is ready to be priced while Seprpent's Mouth needs to be worked

Soft Physique - 4000 ryo

Serpents Mouth - Ok, need to know if it is all teeth or just the teeth that would represent the snake. Like where the vampire teeth would be. (Sorry, don't know the teeth names medically.) Secondly, up to how wide can the mouth extend fully after detaching the jaw? Lastly, when you lock your jaws onto a target, what would need to be done to break from the lock due to it being D Rank level?

Taking Soft Body now, ryo deducted.

Looking for the word fangs, perhaps canine teeth. lol. But either way, this would make all of the user's teeth into fangs. Maximum expansion would be about a foot, and after the jaw locks down it would take a full round of trying in order to pull them off unless the user just lets go.

Ok, add it in as far as the expansion. As far as what it takes to remove you from a lock jaw, I see it taking the enemy C Rank chakra in one hand to have the strength to pull atleast one part of your head. Or a 20 chakra charged punch/kick to your head.

hmm, how about we make it easier. If a person uses up 10 chakra to charge it into the wound it forces the user o let go. So it would take a D rank to break free from a D rank. Sound acceptable?

Indeed. It will lower the price. Make those edits and your good to go.

Done

Serpents Mouth - 2,000 Ryo